Date of publication: 2017-07-08 17:19
I politely mumbled an apology, hoping the rest of her group did not notice how upset I was or how personally I took her comment. It was only a cup of soup, and an honest mistake, but I felt like such a disaster.
The last thing I wanted was for someone to think that I was full of myself. I was mortified. I realized later that I had come off as somewhat egotistical or self-centered because I had shared my long list of extra-curricular activities, academic performance, and hopes for the future. Even though I knew this was not at all the case, I felt ashamed.
if a question says 8766 agree 8767 or 8766 disagree 8767 ,then what should i write in th body paragraphs. whether i have to stick to agree only through out the whole essay or also have to write something about why i diasgree please answer me correctly
Sorry for the delay. Had a quick look and it looks an extremely good essay. My one concern is length. sometimes shorter can be better. Sorry but I simply don 8767 y have the time to look at individual essays.
Example Thesis: Why was I feeling so peaceful while walking down this beach? I realized it was because the beach had always been a place of rest to me.
I liked the passion you convey in this sentence, but you need to maintain a formal, almost reserved voice in academic writing. See my suggestion for alternative wording that does a better job of capturing your experience and of demonstrating how that experience has influenced your decision to seek an advanced degree.
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Can you please explain me about this particular topic:
Compare the advantages and disadvantages of three of the following as media for communicating information. State which you consider to be the most effective.
(extracted from Cambridge IELTS 9, test 6)
You should do your best to answer the question as asked. You may get severely penalised if you write too generally and don 8767 t answer the question. The idea is that the questions are designed for anyone to answer and if you can 8767 t you have a language problem. That sounds a little harsh, no? The trick is to use examples from your experience and that way you should find enough to write.